Hello Bloggers !
My favourite piece of learning this week is my Meerkats point of view story. We had to watch a video called Catch it ( it was about meerkats). Then we had to choose what we wanted to do. We could tell the story from the meerkats point of view, create an internal monologue from the vulture or create a commentary using screencastify of the rugby scene at the end. I did a point of view story if you would like to watch the video here is the link and if you want to read my point of view story it is on the link.
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Have a nice day!
You have written a very detailed recount of the video Jaycee well done. I did notice that you used the word then many times. So to make it read better next time perhaps you could use some different words. Some examples are - next, later, afterwards, also & after that. But great effort, keep it up. D
ReplyDeleteHi Jaycee. So you’ve been a meerkat lately? Wonderful! Well done telling the reader how you spent your day. How did you feel seeing the vulture? Maybe you could have included some speech. Remember to describe not just tell us what’s happening? Were the other meerkats sad? Or angry? Good paragraphs, Jaycee. Keep on writing and sharing! Ka pai!
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